Thursday, August 25, 2011
Ruthless
Red Writing Hood is now Write on Edge.
The prompt is to write a story the length of a tweet - 140 characters. Mine is 128 characters without spaces and 157 with spaces, so I figure that's the right compromise.
I chose to think of a character - someone ruthless (way more ruthless than me), someone fun, someone who makes mistakes and bad choices, and we all love her anyway.
Here it is:
“No love for the haters, motha fuckas!” she screamed out the metro bus window. She sat back in her seat, smiling at the look of shock on her co-workers faces.
Labels:
fiction,
flash fiction,
humor,
office humor,
Red Writing Hood,
Write on Edge
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23 comments:
Ha ha hilarious! Great way to head into the weekend. Good job!
yup! Good way to head into the weekend!
I'm sure many of us wish this was a non-fiction Tweet from our own lives. :) Fun!
Hahaha!!! Great job! Hilarious!
This is fitting for you.
Love it you complete barmpot!
Wow! LOL @ what her coworkers must be thinking.
going out in style....so funny!
I love that you can have any kind of backstory adventure with this. So much fun!
haha! awesome!! :) full justice to the 140 characters!
OMG! The cat picture: awesome. So cathartic that tweet story. I pictured her as a suit wearing power house.
Oh I'm definitely feelin' it, sista! Perhaps one of these days I'm going to do just that! hahaha. A very therapeutic response to the prompt, I must say ;)
Hahahahaha!! this is freaking awesome.
Ha! This made me laugh out loud! I love this girl, whoever she is.
Hee! OMG I love this one!
I love the smiling at her shocked coworkers. She must be feeling sooo smug.
Good take on the prompt!
I can just picture it! Nice tweet story.
Whoever she is - I know there's a nice bottle of wine waiting for her when she gets home - Love the uninhibited path that took!
I love her! This made me think of Office Space.
I like this gal you've created with only 128 characters!
Very Funny! if cat's did have middle fingers we'd all be in trouble.
Fantastic! Loved this piece of microfiction! :>
Were you on the bus with me last week?
I had no idea.
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